Score: 5

"Well..."

submission: "Waterman"

date: December 20, 2003

Don't get me wrong, I like it. But, the characters are drawn very poorly. I mean like, it seems intentional, but you have weird lines on them that could've easily been fixed. And the cars, and other such things are very mis-shapen. The best thing you drew were the non original characters(Prime, Trix Rabbit, Donkey Kong, ect..) And that's just because you probably traced over them. That Breakfast Club joke was DIRECTLY stolen from a Family Guy episode. Taking the humor is one thing, taking a whole joke is another. All forms of art are copying others, but when you know you're copying another...it's time to stop.

Score: 6

"Kay"

submission: The Taste Of Ink

date: March 25, 2003

That took 2 days? Eh...kay. Moving clock sprites is the easiest thing ever in my opinion. And as for the other pictures...a couch, a really ugly bed, a flower, and some speakers were all you had to draw... Those normally take a matter of 15 minutes each...so unless it was one hour a night...the time span makes no sense. Good music choice though.

Score: 4

"Hrm"

submission: Blind Metal Preview

date: March 20, 2003

Well...Korn. The animation was based around Korn's Issues cover...one of them anyway, and then you had that nice little Korn text. My theory is to have a good concept, it has to contain originality. Draw your own characters. C-R-E-A-T-E something. Work more on how you time things as well. My first flash movie went a mile a minute...Most of the people who review you havn't touched flash in their lives and think they know everything. Critics. But I know that timing isn't the easiest thing to master. just work on it.